Comments : Eternal rest of a Sparrow

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Chilling and dark.
    a setting for the usual affect but bent and twisted to give it a new flavor for the dark side

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Your poem touched my soul. Beautiful piece, sista.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Yes I think you have put this poem where it should be - it is quite dark but an awesome write!!!

    I've fallen within the depths of silence
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    What an amazing opening line!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Dark but great:)
    I love it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Bridges

    'Hmmm', was my response to this piece. It's mysterious, in my opinion, enchanting and dark. I like the detail, it painted images perfectly - especially with these last lines;

    Eternally finding our way home, dawn returns
    Another blessed morning rises as the sparrow rests in peace....

    ooooh! o.o
    Great piece, Maple!

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Welp you have done it again, you have worded nature so beautifully that you have came up with yet, another masterpiece.

    "Vertically limbed" <--- that was awesome!
    Great detail in this piece and between the amazing wording, you find a sad mysterious story!