Comments : Cookie Crumbs

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Smiles this early in the morning, this is so sweet. I have heard other people call little children crumb snatchers. lol Thank for this wonderful, cute little poem. So refreshing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    TJ, haha... I like the whole idea and the ending. It's really smile widening :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Its cute, I really like it. Also thanks for the note about your mom calling.. I was thinking you liked to play with the cookie crumbs and name each one of them.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awhh this is so cute. . . its a nice read that fills the heart with memories of all the little ones in my life :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Hehe :D I loooOVE this poem it's very delightful and funny and amazing...greatly written mr. Poet :) everythings fantastic 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hahaha TJ,

    Before I read the little note on the end I was like hug crumbs? I'd rather eat the leftovers, no need to waste! Lol
    Then of course I had seen your note and was like wow it makes even more sense now that you're talking about adorable bubs
    A short but lovely poem that certainly made me smile!!!

    Well done TJ!!!

    x

  • Aww! That is just too sweet.
    Very nice flow and wonderful rhyme.
    Smiles all round for this one.
    Keep them coming. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhhhhhhhhhh this is precious!!!!! I would love to read this poem to my grand babies.... such a sweet and loving write, well done~

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Great poem my King.Loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hehehe after I read the note I read the poem again :D yeah I too was wondering why hug a crumb :P then it all made sense :D
    very cute poem :D lovely

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Such lovely and captivating imagery. Nice write TJ, i read it twice before assimilating it. Evocative, actually was wondering what gave birth to this short but awesome read. ADMIRABLE!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Lol:) I LOVE this poem it made me laugh:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Sweet Cookie Crumbs

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    This has got to be the SWEETEST poem I have ever read TJ.
    Me too, if it wasnt for that ending note I wouldve been confused to what you were refering too.

    It certainly put a smile on my face today, thanks for that.
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is proppr cute man gd job

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem is different because of the personal tone and what it reveals about the character of your mum. A very loveable lady with a big heart:)

    Well done, son.

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    AWWWW this is sooo sweeet, nice poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is creative and sweet as it has been said before. I really like how when you write you use so few words but they create perfect pieces.

  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Great poem well done you got talent keep up the good writing again i like this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Good piece of work short and sweet i really liked the detail and imagination and creativity out of the ordinary. you know t.j the famous irish poet patrick kavanagh wrote that beauty is "plenty ordinary" keep up your good work