Comments : They Remind Me of You

  • 5 years ago

    by Dawn

    Beautifully written and really heartfelt. something i can relate too. simple but touching.

  • Thank you for your comment, Dawn. (:

  • 5 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I love how you got to the point at the beginning, I found it made it more emotional, sometimes it doesn't, but with this it did, great job, loved it, 100/100

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Ahhh... I'm tearing up. :( I can relate to this so much, I have a box of dried flowers from when my mother passed away. I'll always keep them, but like you said I don't know if I love or hate them. A wonderful poem, 5/5.

  • Aww... Sorry for your loss! :(

    Thanks for reading. Appreciate it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really liked this and again related to it. I think I could feel the emotion quite strongly here, I firstly liked how you repeated the box of flowers, it reminded me that you were constantly looking at them, secondly, I know exactly the confusion you get when you get the mixed feelings of love and hate. It is so hard to remember the good times when we miss them, we confuse this for a bad feeling as it makes us long for this person to be here again.

    Great work.

  • 4 years ago

    by Areeba

    Awww, this poem was heart-breaking :(
    it is filled with so much of emotion that one just cannot find any mistake in it..
    whoever they were, just know they are in a better place now ^_^
    awesome write, loved it..

  • Thanks everyone! :)