Comments : Gone To Heaven

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Usually rhymed poetry ends up emotionless, but this one did not. The rhymes flowed really well, and this is a great dedication. I'm really sorry for your loss, but I'm glad you turned a tragic event into a beautiful poem. Hope all is well...
    Keep writing :)
    -X

  • Thanks for taking the time to read and comment (:

  • Thanks for taking the time to read and comment (:

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This really hit me hard. :( last year there was 3 young girls in my community, one who i graduated high school with, who died in a plane crash. such a great dedication to these young people, so sorry for your loss. 5/5

    • Thanks. And sorry for yours also. I'd never wish that pain on anyone and I wasnt even as close to them as others had been. Thanks for taking the time to read this. Means the world. (:

  • 5 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Lots of emotion. sad, i almost cried.

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    So sorry for the loss. May God bless all. This is really full of sadness. Great poem