Usually rhymed poetry ends up emotionless, but this one did not. The rhymes flowed really well, and this is a great dedication. I'm really sorry for your loss, but I'm glad you turned a tragic event into a beautiful poem. Hope all is well...
Keep writing :)
This really hit me hard. :( last year there was 3 young girls in my community, one who i graduated high school with, who died in a plane crash. such a great dedication to these young people, so sorry for your loss. 5/5