Comments : Flowers Of Love

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Gush! This is really wonderful!

    You're the "Angelica" in my eyes
    That swifts beyond the horizon of Love;
    The "Clover" flower below of Time,
    Is what I wonder within myself.

    I love the way you write your imagery here...I love flowers you know, so I really like how you form this beautiful poem. I like the starting of your poem..the flowers you used gave a sparked to the whole piece. Very lovely.

    This "Heliotrope" I'm holding on
    Is what I really possessed after all;
    For the " Jasmine" I'm hoping for,
    Is still I wonder for [?!]

    I think, you overuse here the apostrophe but I love the way it is.

    The "Roses" beyond the Time
    Fits this Blue "Salvia" flower,
    Coz even though I'm far away,
    Your face is always on the cerulean sky.

    Cleverly written. Nothing to say about this stanza coz it was written perfect.

    But still, You're a masterpiece of Art
    That blooms beautifully In Time
    More Lovelier than any of this,
    Lovely Flowers of Love...

    Well, this piece is perfectly written and I'm afraid to spot any mistakes from here. So lovely--so romantic. Congratulations, you done it very well:)
    5/5
    -C

    • 11 years ago

      by PrinceLawrence

      Thank you crishmerl for your great compliment.
      Those flowers have their own meanings so i uses an apostrophe to classify them.

      Angelica = Inspiration, Clover = Think of Me. Heliotrope = Eternal Love, Jasmine = Sweet Love ata.. Rose = Desired, Love, Blue Salvia = Thinking of you, Tulip = Declaration Of love, Yarrow = Everlasting Love

      I call them flowers of love :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow! That's great..I like how those flowers you describe and give meaningful uses...you're so brilliant:)