Raven Wind

by Maple Tree   Feb 14, 2012


Speechless, finger to lips conceal my words
Consumed within transient emerald leaves
Breezes tease a raven's broken wing
As my ebony locks intertwine, laced In her feathers
Bird of rhapsody and my nature loving soul, unite
Creations of elegant colors dance in prisms of golden sun
Spinning In silent choreography, we are one flying spirit....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I have noticed in several of your poems that you always capitalize the word "In" no matter where it lies within the poem, I like the personalization but wonder if it is intentional. As always your poetry sweeps me off my feet and there aren't many out there who can connect with nature as you can in words. Awesome stuff.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Sista

    You really are an image weaver. I am repeating myself but I am never tired of telling how much I love your pieces.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I always enjoy reading your poems, they are fun to read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, very interesting to me because I rarely read poems that are about life. I like this one because it makes the readers think.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I really love this poem:)

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