Comments : Forbidden Decadence

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is such a very creative way of describing your love for it.

    Firstly if I hadn't already just eated I'd be drooling right now thinking of some kind of dessert lol

    Awesome write. I love the layout and when I first read it, I thought it seemed like a tongue twister at times!!!

    Great poem

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Can u bring me a slice of that cake?l lol
    Thats creative:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    This is a perfet tribute.Loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Creative is right awesome in every way haha

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I swear even before reading the end note, your words gave made crave for a cake because I've been craving for cakes, for a while, lol.

    It seems so real, I wish it were real, at least to have a sumptuous bite. Lovely dear, your never cease to wow me with your poems. Breathtaking.. I love this and the cake, lol. Blessings :-).