I really like your poem here, you show a lot of talent in your writing. some lines are a bit to long for m taste and through the rhythm off just a bit, you might consider cutting some syllables out of them. example are... line 2... and the first line in the last stanza.
--I like the poem and it is so relatable for some people who been hurt before...and frustrated in the means of love. Yet, it not easy to open your heart again and to welcome love into you heart because of the past that you anticipate some way you will be hurt when you love again...
"He's everything she's wanted,
but she just cant seem to let him in,
Because her hearts been hurt before,
and she promised herself never again"
--Well, this part tells that the girl withdraws herself and constrain her heart not to in love again. I like the ideas here.
Just take some time and listen,
See where you need to start,
Time and Patience is what it takes,
to mend a broken heart,
--Yeah, I agree in this part when you trying to let that person loves you... you must have patience and time to wait it until the wound of her heart heal..."it takes time to mend a broken heart" love this line...
No matter how many months or years it takes,
1,2 or even 3,
Waiting for someone special just shows,
how special it can really be,
--Well, the ending part is good, too. I really enjoy reading this. Keep writing more:))