Comments : Arbutus (Doditsu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mermaid Woman

    Beautiful! Simple! Meaningful!!!!!!

    Love this one!

    :)Amber

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I love your nature poems because they reflect how meaningful nature is to you, this makes every poem so beautiful.

    I have not seen this form before, but I actually like it and I am fascinated by how much you manage to say in so few words.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    ^^
    I love nature poems too, actually I love all ur poems:)
    This poem is simple, yet so meaningful:)
    Great piece:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautiful,

    Love the simplicity, gorgeous poem!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Thank you for sharing this form .you nailed it as usual ! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    You have a certain connection with nature and it shows in your poetry. I adore nature poems and if there is anyone who can pull one off this masterfully done it is definitely you. Absolutely beautiful write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I always try to give in depth comments, but your poems don't allow me to do so (lol). It's just beautiful, each time, and I feel like I'm saying the same thing over. You are queen of nature and imagery!

  • 12 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.You are an ardent lover of nature.In such simple words you magnify the spell of beauty.Awesome write.