This is very deep and provoking.. you moved me with this. I like how you defined thoughts...
amazing, shanix

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his poem has some of the best imagery that I've seen lately. Fruit without teeth? A branch like a withered lip? This is one of those poems that made me jealous of the mind that came up it.

This poem had the interesting task of trying to describe what a thought is like. Appropriately, the only way the writer could do this was to compare thoughts to objects, and in the next breath to contrast them again. It's fitting, for the ethereal, intangible nature of thoughts to be both like and unlike, and never anything at once.

This poet had two poems on my "short list" this week. I'm excited to see what they bring in the future.

What a clever thought !
Our life too Rhymes along with nature,the happenings and events are much similar to our nearby environment,It depends on us to relate !
"vision is the art of seeing things invisible" Truly said by Sir Jonathan Swift !
You effort to transcend the boundaries convincing or expressing the phenomenon of life.
appreciated !!

Amazingly written!very so deep..i like the metaphors, the flow of every line in your poems...every part is meaningful..love it!
rate 5/5

Very well written amazing poem :)

"Thoughts fall like leaves and rot like fruit" - excellent and an excellent piece!
All the best,
Ben