The Blood Countess (Elizabeth Bathory)

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Feb 22, 2012


The Blood Countess (Elizabeth Bathory)

A dark haired beauty of tender years
Is touched by evil and kindles fears
A malignant force runs through her veins
A soulless shell as blood she rains
Fair servant girls she does enslave
Tortured and bleed in ways depraved

In her huge castle of broken mirrors,
Where screams are concealed in it's terror,
Her accursed desire stirs everyday.
As drinking blood lets her outstay.
Old skin renewed in the bloody baths.
The innocent saturated by her wrath.

Teeth rip and tear as flesh she devours
650 died to engorge youthful powers
Buckets of blood ran across her floor
Like waves lapping against evil's shore
Wickedness built its roots in the air
Forsaken, by her deeds, was the snare,

To be forever the darkness bride,
No matter how hard she had tried
Hate blocked her way to forgiveness
Surrounded by bloody madness
When girls she picked from nobility
Authorities approached with hostility

* a poem I wrote with a very talented lady a couple years ago..... Goth Marionette)

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1077717

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  • 11 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I haven't really been on the site properly for a really long time and this was the first poem I've read since coming back and wow!! Thank you for still writing the most amazing masterpieces, your talent has just kept on getting better.

    You know, you're so talented and gifted. Very few people can write in so many different genre's and still be absolutely amazing no matter what it is.

    Reading your poems is a gift to everyone:) hope you're doing well TJ:) (I still have the same issue with the site ... They STILL only have a voting scale of up to 5 which seriously is an insult to your incredible talent.)

    Well done for yet another AMAZING poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi TJ¨
    What a horror story covered in poems, love it not the content, that is a bit to bloody

    five

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Magnificent and amazing,,,a brilliant write with great everything I love love loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was absolutely awesome, its like a cradle of filth song. great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    What a beautifully darkened poem,,, it's really bloody tempting :)