Comments : My Horse Viper (Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful!!! I'm picturing a black stallion, running wild within a midnight breeze under the moonlight..... (thats the vision I just had)... Love the imagery....

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I love the imagery so much...

    I pictured a stallion in the flurry aura, majestically running(a prince riding it) with its muscles twitching and coming to a halt at the entrance of the castle upon seeing a damsel; a maiden.

    Fiary tale scenery I had. :-), lol. Very stunning I love it. Bless you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is obvious from the image your words give the reader that you love this horse very much. I can see you in my minds eye, sitting astride Viper with you and he running as fast as you can, wind blowing around you, enjoying the freedom of the ride and nature. Amazing how 3 lines can give so much information. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a beautiful Haiku. I absolutely LOVE horses they are gorgeous and yes very majestic.

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Wow I love Haiku and this piece is amazing:)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I love haikus and this one has an amazing imagery.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Double post

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Sorry, I have bad connetion. Triple post.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Reminds me of Black Beauty ... brilliantly described :D short pieces yet you managed to add lively imagery :D as always :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    TJ, I love horses. And I know you ride them, right?

    Amazing description of the horse,,,,I like its legs :p... and love the description of what it can do while taking off.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful my King.Bravo.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I love the title :) and the poems good,,written by a great poet