Hurricane (Haiku)

by Lioness   Feb 24, 2012


Looks are deceiving.
The storm clouds seem sweet just like
white cotton candy.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Lovely haiku :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This is a lovely haiku that in my opinion is faultless. I loved what you have done witht he picture

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Indeed, looks are deceiving (in the imagine), I adore how you transformed that into an amazing haiku.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I am fascinated with clouds, the storm clouds that are dark and deceivingly beautiful
    Great haiku :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww Liz this is a beautiful haiku! I love how the message is clear in this poem, in such a short structure. In a few words, you made an impact. I love the inspiration, and thank you for providing the photo... it really does look like white cotton candy! LoL I love cotton candy :)

    I completely agree about how looks can be deceiving... I love your haiku!

    Great job hon =)

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