Comments : Hurricane (Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I loved the haiku and picture.

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very interesting Haiku indeed.

    'Looks are deceiving', this itself says it all.

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Indeed how beautiful it looks but how devastating are the effects.
    Wonderful haiku

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    What a cute haiku I love it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Liz- I admire the haiku form... you captured the clouds beauty..just before It explodes like confetti and rains rush In like wicked stallions.... :-)
    LOVE IT!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Lovely, what a beautiful description before turning into a natural disaster. Bless you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    AH. This is such a wonderful and creative image, I didn't pay much attention the title and read the poem thinking it was fog or some sort of storm (hello, storm clouds lol), but the white cotton candy and the hurricane clouds/rain/disaster... wow. Wonderful imagery. You did awesome with so little words!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Great image i admire anyone who tries formed poetry as tge rules you have to stick to well donex

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww Liz this is a beautiful haiku! I love how the message is clear in this poem, in such a short structure. In a few words, you made an impact. I love the inspiration, and thank you for providing the photo... it really does look like white cotton candy! LoL I love cotton candy :)

    I completely agree about how looks can be deceiving... I love your haiku!

    Great job hon =)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I am fascinated with clouds, the storm clouds that are dark and deceivingly beautiful
    Great haiku :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Indeed, looks are deceiving (in the imagine), I adore how you transformed that into an amazing haiku.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This is a lovely haiku that in my opinion is faultless. I loved what you have done witht he picture

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Lovely haiku :)