Oh I love this poem!!! Great job with the forming of it and it just flows so easily. If I was reading it out alloud it would roll off the tongue.

To me, Red roses are known for love and white roses for me remind me of death. I guess because whenever I have seen white roses it's always been at a funeral or something.

I read it and feel as if it might be the loss of a loved one. White roses meaning death and then red for love. I love how you have called the poem Bleeding rose. Bleeding meaning the red part and of course possibly death itself.

TJ you are an inspiration.

I loved it very much!!!

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I really like the feel of this triolet, it was natural and beautiful and created soft meaning. I loved the imagery, I just had one question, was this line: "romantic mix of purity an love" supposed to be "romantic mix of purity in love" or and love? just didn't quite grasp the meaning of "an love" sorry if I misread. And I liked the simple thought of "touch her heart"- so innocent and pure and it inspires that encouragement, to don't let go and don't let feelings die.

Keep it up, take care

Roses as you know are my favorite flowers. I can see that white rose now with swirls of red in it and it would be sure to win a heart. On a technical note, in this line, the word an should be and.

romantic mix of purity an love

I missed your poems. This is really beautiful

Another masterpiece

I really like this poem, not only because of your choice of words, but rather because of the message you convey and the image you portray, wonderful.

First things first, God bless you.
I've never written a triolet before, thought it'll be kind of hard. Now seeing this lovely piece, I think i'll pull it off not as I expected.

This is a classic love poem. Fused with subtle sweet words that portrays a gloomy message in this heart breaking/lost love poem. I always look out for your next poem, knowing it'll be a sight to behold and be charmed to.

More ink to your pen...and wisdom to your talent. Blessings to you always, BRAVO! Cheers!!!

Brilliant TJ

A stunning piece in my personal opinion. Triolets always seem to be to difficult, anything with repeating poetry is really for me.. I don't quite understand why it is so hard for me to grasp that But this piece is stunning.

Even with the way its set up you nail it again and again with the imagery that i feel from the piece and the feelings I am bestowed with.

I wish the piece could have been longer if it wasn't formed so i coudl enjoy it more.

The Talent that comes off it is great and i felt some of the word choices were odd but it honestly added to the beauty of this poem. Thank you TJ for sharing it.

I cant say i would change to much because of how the format of the poem is and because i am unable to write one myself... Pleased to read it

I love ur choice of words:)
Great poem TJ^_^

TJ-

The elegance of this piece Is so pretty..... this piece dances... beautiful arrangement of poetic aroma!! love this poem~

First off I loved your title. I think you picked a good one as it drew me into the poem and made me feel curious.

As for the poem itself I loved the read. I was touched by this piece and even though it wasn't a long poem I felt it said alot.

5/5

I like this form and I must say that you did well with it too.

Simple white rose laced in red
romantic mix of purity an love

^I can imagine this lovely white rose with a pretty lace of red..a lovely combination. The combination of purity (white) and love (red) gives an elegant and royal look for the rose..lovely!

speaking words that can't be said

^Flowers does make a woman smile and it speaks to her in ways not even words can match!

touch her heart let feelings spread

^While reading this line I could picture the rose unfolding its petals...blooming. Just like a smile on a woman's face when she sees this lovely rose..liked this line!

attached on wings of a mourning dove

^And to see such a lovely rose associated with a mourning dove, just breaks the heart. I found this line touching. Overall, a lovely triolet and an excellent read :)

Wow... beautiful... I love this poem very much and you wrote a lovely triolet. Your imagery and word choice were magnificent, and made me imagine a room filled with flowers and love would be blossoming... it would be so serene and lovely.

This would be a hit poem on a Valentine's Day/ anniversary card - you would make so much from it! Hehe <3

I just want to ask did you mean to write "and" between the words purity and love? Just checking :)

This poem is beautiful, nothing more can express how much I enjoyed it. Nominating it <3

Wow not sure what to say on this one cuz it's so greatly written lovely and romantic,,amazing I loved it,,fantastic job and it has so much feeling and so much meaning,,,closest love feeling poem u've written I think 5/5 <3