Comments : FEBUARY EVENING IN EIRE (IRELAND) by Christopher

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Beautiful imagery to paint an evening in Ireland .'Oozing from her aura '......love reference to aura ! You constructed excellent rhyme .......well done bro ! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mattias Ostling

    Loved the imagery, so vividly described. Great rhymes as well.

    You typoed two words, however. cresoted (I suppose you mean crested?), and specled (Do you mean speckled?)
    Other than that it was perfect.

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    I understand the cresoted fence should be creosoted, i.e. made from treated lumber. I agree that specled should be speckled. Also, PnQ rules prohibit ALL CAPS in the title. It should be Initial Caps only.

    That having been said, this is an amazing poem. I imagine you standing in one spot, surveying the landscape and recording what you see like a camera obscura. Your imagery does magic for the scene, capturing not the mere incidents but essence of their intertwined presences.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I loved how you have described in detail... beautiful imagery and wonderfully worded.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This was more like a painting then a poem. It was smooth, full of images like the stroke of an artist brush. Excellent

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This was really beautiful and descriptive, I can see you gave much thought to presenting things as they truly are. Much eye for detail.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid