Feud and Trouble

This is excellent - like something out of Macbeth! The rhyming is excellent as is the language used. Well done - a different and accomplished write.
All the very best,
Ben

Kay,*

I had to comment on this one because I loved it a lot. It's one of those catchy little verses where the flow is 100 percent perfect and you find yourself boppin along to each line!

It's one of those poems that makes me smile over and over and I always love your ability to make me laugh, doesn't matter if it's in poems, in M&M or just in general. You have such a lovely personality and it shines through in poems like this.

I must say, I was pretty impressed by your ingredients. Mountain Dew, how yum! Some interesting contrasts amongst the ingredients you picked but I can tell you had a lot of fun with this prompt.

"Should do the trick to hurt my ex
With this darkened spell of hex"

Poor ex? lol or does he deserve this one! hahaha. Loved it, Kay! Thanks for participating in all my weird little prompts.

-Mel

Sorry about double post doll!

Bahahaha! I loved this...I was reading this, getting so into it, and then bam! The last line left me cracking up!! I was like yesssss! .

I actually truly loved what you've done here, your descriptions were awesome! I've totally lost interest in rhyming poems but this was great! I'm so glad u made it funny! It made me smile!