My Butterfly

So this is it!!! your husband right??

Oh my, Maple!!! This was incredible!!! The sincerity - I'm astonished! I can tell how much he means to you, Honey. This reaches deep within, and tugs on the readers heart-strings. Beautiful and tragic, Oh I am so so very sorry!! You both are in my prayers!! He's bigger than this disease, He'll overcome it! :') Keep faith!! Remarkable piece!! Absolutely.

This was just a beautiful write.

He is my butterfly
broken wings,
radiating beautiful.

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This was my favourite stanza I'd have to say because it very poetically says...I love you ...warts and all.

Locked within a mason jar
labeled "Cancer"
he's more than a disease.

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This one also because I loved the double meaning in it.

The only small critique I can give is...I wasn't very keen on you using...my husband because it really wasn't necessary....even to those who don't know the situation...I think they may have still worked out that you are talking about someone you love..hope that makes sense?

Awww this is lovely, sad but really beautiful, very creative :)

Bombshell imagery that paints a somber picture yet it exudes so much love and hope.' He's more than a disease ' -that line is so beautiful -love conquers all ! X