Void

by Lonely Rider   Mar 9, 2012


A swirl of silence,
wraps nostalgic whiff of tea,
then emptiness speaks.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kuro

    Im adding this to my favorites. absolutely wonderful. i know exactly this very feeling. so hard to describe. the only way is by how you found it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This poem it really does describe emptiness very well, this void. . . it's so short and very descriptive, I absolutely love this :) the poem is definitely not empty though

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Wow..i dont know what to say...three lines and yet big in meaning. Well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I so love this!!!

    I love the image of how emptiness speaks. I believe this is true as the silence can say nothing at all but mean so much. Silence can speak for itself. I think you have done well with this and loved it!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Awesome, scents like tea or coffee etc can leave the soul feeling empty or sad because of past experiences..this was short and brilliant