Comments : I dont need a gun by ntswaki mathebula

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I liked this..it has attitude. What I would suggest is this....you tell us what you don't need so maybe try finishing off the poem with what you do need?

    You have a few little typos that are easily fixed...sincerely hope you edit this out because...it has the foundations to be a really good poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by ntswaki

    I need to be self empowered,tell everybody who have problems that you dont have to do bad to fill good and sucide is not an option.i want to a mentor to young ones.and i want fullfil my mission to be in this world.
    thank u

  • 5 years ago

    by Jollin

    I like the lines.... i'm sure you'll come up with a better title. Nice thoughts....

  • 5 years ago

    by ntswaki

    Thanx