I tried...

by Rihanna   Mar 10, 2012


I'm trying to not
let you see
how much
you mean to me.

I tried to not
let you in,
but somehow
you just win

I'm trying so hard
to not fall apart
but it's not easy
when I have
a broken heart.

I tried to not
show that I cared
But that was hard
because you were
always there.

I tried to not fall
in love with you,
and now I'm trying
to not fall apart,
But you've stolen
every piece of my
heart and now
it's dismantled.

I fell for your lies
I believed that
you loved me.

So now, I'm trying to not
fall apart, but it's not easy
when I have a broken heart.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    I'm trying to not
    let you see
    how much
    you mean to me.

    I tried to not
    let you in,
    but somehow
    you just win
    <<favorite part

    its hard to hide your true feelings sometimes :/

    you described your emotions beautifully :]

    i loved it :]]

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I know how you feel :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Sad and nice poem with great rhymes!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    Very sad, but beuatiful the way you construct words, and the poem it self great job girl :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Celtic Warrior

    The rhythm is great and the poem stays on topic. great job, 5/5

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