Comments : Bella

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Omg Liz... I never read something with such organic warmth and unrestrained flow... This is purely amazing... Bella... The name itself echoes in my mind because of its crisp melody. And the poem, it feels like heaven because im listening now to Hello World (lady Antebellum) while reading. I just wasted my nominations... It's totally going into my favorites. Lovely and mesmerizing.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Liz, Liz.

    A dolphin, I like dolphins! I want to touch one some day. I'm glad you are sharing this with us. I was picturing everything and at the end hehe I was looking at my hand. I feel kind of awkward by just saying it but that's how much I like the poem. I was picturing me touching the dolphin. XD

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Dolphins are precious and this poem is so pretty ~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Liz this poem is really beautiful! I wish I was lucky enough to swim with a dolphin then again I can't swim :( but I am glad you got the chance to swim with one and I loved the beautiful poem you created because of it.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Really amazing, it flows with tender and warm rhythm and the title just like Abed said, it echoes and the name Bella brings up memories so I definitely liked it so much : )
    well written and formed Liz

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Dolphins are such sensual crwatures, and the beauty of them really shone through in this, It must be a life-changing, amazing experience, to cherish always....

    The simpleness of the piece, added to that magical feeling, that instant rush of happiness and freeness

    Love it
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    Oh wow, very very beautiful :) dolphins are wonderful creautures and you described them very well, this is lovely

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    The best experience of my life was feeding and petting a dolphin but to swim with one would be ideal

    Great poem , the excitement and pleasure you had read loud and clear..excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Muran

    How much you more merge with the nature, you are more merging to life, great piece of work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    This must be an remembrance forever...
    You told this in a great poem!I loved it!

    Steven

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I certainly loved the poem and adored it even more so knowing what you were talking about before reading the end caption. I only felt like there was one draw back in this entire stunning piece....the use of the word "rubber" seemed distracting to such a beautiful porpoise. That however is the only thing that held me back. This poem is beautiful and I too would love to swim with a dolphin, Lucky You!