Cloud Fascination

by Maple Tree   Mar 13, 2012


It's a mystery devoured In blue,
cotton ball delight, billowy pillow,
I desire to be one, someday.

It's colossal glory hypnotizes me,
within my visionary mind, I Imagine
being shaped In the form of a dove.

Maybe one day soon, someone will
slumber underneath an old oak,
trying to figure out what formation

I am at that very moment....

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  • 12 years ago

    by victor dyck

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Beautiful symbol of peace blended with a cloud. Its so therapeutic......meditative to look at the sky etc ..........good for one's aura . Lovely write as always. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    This one I really loved....I also have a fascination with clouds and I'm always looking for faces...mountains anything really in them haha!!!

    This poem reminded me of a painting I saw years ago in an aboriginal art centre and...to this day I regret that I didn't buy it. The painting was of Uluru and the face of one of the elders was painted in cloud form....it was so beautiful!

    I desire to be one, someday.
    ^^^^^

    This line was just...terrific..perfect in fact!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Cotton balls!

    Amazing images and lovely poem. I wonder why a shape as a dove? Do you like doves... And it's pretty interesting. I use to spent hours looking at the sky and playing drawing charades with them lol. I could always find a shape. Once there was a beautiful castle and other time a tooth. Lol

    Pretty cool, your piece is making me go back in my memories.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Ohhhhhhh how beautiful is this.

    I love the idea of sleeping under trees and looking up in the clouds and thinking about what shape they are, what animal they look like. It is such a lovely image and I am sure it is something that EVERYONE has done at least once in their lives. I love the words you have used. Everything sounds so peaceful. I love the whole cotton ball delight, they do look like cotton balls lol I went on a plane the other day and was looking at the clouds thinking the same thing.

    Awesome poem hun,

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