Comments : Heart flu

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I guess it's an original idea, you're going through... love flu! I like how you incorporated 'office work' as a way of forgetting the flu... and pursuing your career normally, as if nothing happened, but the truth is that the love virus is killing you. Amazing work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love using the metaphor of flu to describe the sickness that this love has on you.

    Awesome write

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Doesn't it just feel like it sometimes haha..Love the metaphor, and the creativity of this

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    What prodigy I find here!! Step to the beat.. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    What prodigy I find here!! Step to the beat gem.. Great job.