Comments : Exquisite

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Hmm some lip gloss is yummy hahah

    excellent, I love how your poems have that twist at the end.. brilliant and cherry lip gloss omg yess haha

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Hmm.. yup, some lip gloss does taste good.

    I wonder why? too..

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Excellent Liz-

    I do love your twist at the end message!! You made lip gloss sound so sensual and tasteful!! ha ha

  • 12 years ago

    by Muran

    A smooth sailing to a new feeling. great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Hahaha I didnt expect to see lip gloss:)

    Great poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    :) I like this poem a lot and I thought you were on about chap stick not lip gloss

    Nice flow and twist

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I like how you described thoroughly and awesomely the whole small scenery of putting on lipstick. lol something inside me wants to taste the lipstick. Great write, Liz :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Wauh, fun nice and sweet love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    :)
    This was really good, it sounded so senual and explicit to begin with and then... the ending, all that for lip gloss...

    but yes, some lip gloss tastes nice...

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    That was very well written. I got a good laugh at the end :) Loved it greatly.

    Overall Rating: 5/5