Comments : Destiny of a Marooned Dog (Free Verse)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Gasp! What an opening stanza!! Any time a poet can use history in their piece and make it sound poetic, it amazes me. I find that incredibly beautiful.

    And your last stanza, seriously breathtaking...I can picture the brightest planet, jupiter in the sky by the moon, and a seaman gazing up at it...the imagery was amazing, you did awesome with this!