Awww very good writing :]

i hope he sees how much u care :]

good job

Please do not feel hopeless. Through your poetry it seems that you are going through a difficult patch in your life. Try and be strong because I know how it feels to be left along.
Have faith in god and believe in yourself, everything will be alright.

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