Listen To The Sound

by Angel   Mar 18, 2012


Listen to the sound,
Of a heart that's breaking down.
Ever so slowly it's being destroyed,
By all of those evil unlucky boys.

Now listen to the sound of a broken heart,
Slowly but surely being pulled apart.
By all of those men who think they're so fly,
But all the really do is make her cry.

Listen to the sound of the girl that's breaking down,
Torturing herself without a sound.
She thinks she'd be better off dead,
Because of the voices she hears in her head.

Now listen to the sound of a girl who finally sees hope,
Because she's finally found a man who can help her cope.
She is no longer on her own,
Because love is all this guy has shown.

Listen to the sound a heart being fixed,
Being put back together without being tricked.
With him she's learned to truly smile,
And their love will not last for just a while.

Now listen to the sound of a girl who's alive,
Finally happy without tears in her eyes.
She's learned to love and she's learned to care,
And she's learned that for her he'll always be there.

I wrote this for my friends Allie and Reyna. But this poem is not just for them. It's for anyone who is hurting or going through a hard time. To anyone who is hurting and reading this I want you to know that you are loved. If you are alone know that there is someone special out there for you. If you ever need someone to talk to please feel free to message me. I will always answer :)

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  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very fascinating...sad poem..it touches my heart...the rhymes are very good..nice work=)

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Really good description :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This is so sweet. The ending really made me smile :)
    I love the word choice and message of this poem 5/5
    Keep writing!

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I loved the emotion in this and the hope that will always prevail :)
    Love is a gift, it has no tricks, no lies, and is something that will last forever.
    Beautiful piece, good flow, and an inspiring poem that a heart can be fixed, that you don't have to be broken and alone.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem- it means a lot!
    Take care-

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    There are many great rhymes!Nice poem!
    I loved it:)

    Steven