Comments : Gone

  • 12 years ago

    by Lizbeth

    I really like the beginning and end of this poem.. i think you could really go somewhere with it. It's deep. It just seems the middle doesn't fit. It's really good though :) I know with my poems i'm always going back and rewording lines to make it sound better and express how i feel a lot better too.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tilly Toe Tottes xx

    Thank you very much , :)