Woah how gorgeous is this poem. What I love about this piece is it entices the reader - I felt enticed as soon as I read the first stanza. There was such a beautiful image there especially with the thunderstorm brewing. I love the feeling knowing there is a storm coming, the air seems so poetic as well.

I love how you have described that you get lost in other people's poems. The idea that you become a part of their lives especially when people open up so much and show their vulnerability with their writings.

AWESOME, AWESOME

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I really loved this piece mainly because you described how others writing leaves you at peace and lets you see who they are... Amazingly written and enticing :)

As if the stanzas call out my name,
asking me to feel their emotional agony.

^^^awesome poem Maple. I love everything about this piece!

Nominated.

Awesome poem, I like it. The thunderstorm brewing was awesome.

Shocking, you write a poem not about nature and still pull nature in ;) hahahah.

Ohhh this is GORGEOUS! I'm only a little confused as to some of your lines having the I's capitalized (In...Invite etc). I would edit those a little to make it grammatically correct.

Otherwise.. just wow. This is pure, pure beauty - I know you read a TON and you must get a whirlwind of emotion from all the poems you go through.