Very sad and wondeful poem with good rhymes!Well written!
I loved it!

Steven

Omg! so sad! :( i cried while reading it... soo good! :)

Good :)

This was a great poem. A lot of emotion displayed through affection between the two lovers here. Also told a story of their life just by this poem. Nice write. :)

This was amazing! It was so good you could actually picture what was happening & felt the emotion as well. I think this deserves to be published and think it's very well written, you definitely have some talent as you already know. :p great job! :)

Ohhh..... so sad n beautifully written u gotta 5 frm me

This was beautiful! ;]
and sad i shed a tear lol
gosh your such a talented writer!
5.5!

That is so emotional, I almost broke down into sops, those words joined together in such a materpeice and without doubt from a very loving heart, filled with heartflt words and dreams up ahead!

Spectacalur

100/100