Comments : Illusion Of A Fantasy.......(Does Love Exist ) ?

  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    You'll find the girl that loves and u do too:)
    Everything will be great:)
    Its really sad, but I love it^_^

  • 6 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Good rhyme scheme ........if you believe in love -it exists.

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    If you ask me this poem sounds unfinished,,like you want to fit the whole world into,,as if you had centuries of feelings ready to explode and speak but excellent job,,well written,,amazing emotion flow and wording,,that really helps the poet or reader to grasp your poem and what you feel and more so for all who relate,,I am very positive I felt from when I asked these questions,,still do but I have also overcome them as well and I'm sure everyone says it but one day,,that day will come....when least expect it and you will find the one u seek for she would be seeking you as well and that love will be great and I wish u luck on life's journey,,,,great poem I loved it 5/5