Let the Flowers Blossom (Triolet)

Ive never heard of a triolet before....but then again i only wrote my first haiku yesterday lol, i love how this piece flows, very heart felt and honest, i also picked up on and love the part about infatuation and love being proved true, almost like you cant believe its love until it proven.....but just my interpretation of it though, great write :-)))

A good attempt at this form which can be so difficult to master.

The combination of the words worked well and the poem held it's intergrity from the start to the end.

Well done.

I loved this. Although I am not familiar with triolet poems I thought this had great flow and I liked how you described the feelings of the two people here and how they realized their feelings were deep, normally I am not much for repetitious poems but this one worked really well, I felt like the repitition here denoted more emphasis on the feeling you were trying to express therefore making the poem more powerful. Very nicely done!

I thought this was a great Triolet. Your use of repititions worked really well here. I think they were great because for instance your part:

We thought it was infatuation but our love proved true,
our hearts united and our smiles widened by the day. Love blossomed between us, both had no clue,
it was unexpected, momentous and blew us away.

It worked well bringing out that you thought it was infatuation. Sometimes you don't know if it's love or infatuation. So of course your repitions came into play nicely with "both had no clue." All in all very nice work. :)

Hw i wish those words were meant fr me.nyc art