The Royal Army of the Forest( collab with Liliana)

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Mar 24, 2012


The forest is a storyteller,
leaves nervures trace an
enchanted sentence taken
from a fairytale.

Sheltered by tiny soldiers and
their queens, fragile colonies
of organized workers protecting
nature's kingdom of brilliance.

Royalty in miniature they
keep busy running the kingdom
though miniscule they are mighty
without them the story would die.

Their ability captivates, and
mesmerizes the human race.
Mighty oaks would parish,
vibrant greens dare to brown

please comment and vote on hers as well
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1193000

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Great images well done both of you

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Really amazing ! : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Woow this is an enchanting piece:)

    The forest is a storyteller,
    leaves nervures trace an
    enchanted sentence taken
    from a fairytale.
    ^^^
    i really really really love this stanzaa, I like the personification how the forest is a storyteller:)
    Great job both of u:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I am so loving this nature collaboration!! You two did a beautiful piece....very nice~

    I especially adore this stanza;

    "Sheltered by tiny soldiers and
    their queens, fragile colonies
    of organized workers protecting
    nature's kingdom of brilliance."

    ^^ tiny soldiers and queens is an awesome way to describe the powers and glory of the ants....along with the ending stanza.... just brings this creative nature beauty to life!!!

    Very nice TJ and Liliana

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Glad to see two kite runners collaborating with so much harmony and synchronization.
    I love the over all scenery.. and the ending!
    wohoo.. lovely piece