Comments : The Royal Army of the Forest( collab with Liliana)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    Thanks you for writting this collab with me, your're a great writer :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Great collab! I think both your styles worked together really well and it made a good read. I look forward to reading future collab's by the pair of you as you worked together so well.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Really good. I can't distinguish who wrote which part.
    I find Collabs to be really difficult but you two did a great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is beautiful. I love the images and I think forests are amazing so it was awesome to see you guys write about it.

    I love the fact I could not tell who wrote what part. You guys teamed up pretty well with your collab. Awesome write!!!

    Very enchanting!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    How beautifully written:)

    In the poem I can clearly see the love you both have for Nature and so do I!

    Sheltered by tiny soldiers and
    their queens, fragile colonies
    of organized workers protecting
    nature's kingdom of brilliance.

    ^^
    This was my favorite part. I am sometimes moved to tears by the zealous way in which animals and insects keep on working all day long to do what their insticts tell them to do..I so wish our eyes would open up to their magnificence and that we would start to truly give the other inhabitants on this earth the respect they so deserve:)

    Well done!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Glad to see two kite runners collaborating with so much harmony and synchronization.
    I love the over all scenery.. and the ending!
    wohoo.. lovely piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I am so loving this nature collaboration!! You two did a beautiful piece....very nice~

    I especially adore this stanza;

    "Sheltered by tiny soldiers and
    their queens, fragile colonies
    of organized workers protecting
    nature's kingdom of brilliance."

    ^^ tiny soldiers and queens is an awesome way to describe the powers and glory of the ants....along with the ending stanza.... just brings this creative nature beauty to life!!!

    Very nice TJ and Liliana

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Woow this is an enchanting piece:)

    The forest is a storyteller,
    leaves nervures trace an
    enchanted sentence taken
    from a fairytale.
    ^^^
    i really really really love this stanzaa, I like the personification how the forest is a storyteller:)
    Great job both of u:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Really amazing ! : )

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Great images well done both of you