I'm a Lunatic, But He loves Me

You are not lunatic, you crazy, lmfao... I had the intention to come here and comment on this baby poem but couldn't because I have hospital shifts and books! So, after a long and tiresome battle between me and my father, I decided to open PnQ and just read poems then comment, haha. Anyway, I don't know why I talk too much and I'm sorry for that, let me just talk about your poem, I'll come later to edit my crap, lol.

I like the way you wrote how he can understand you, and how he can unfold those complicated feelings inside of you just by looking into your eyes. Understanding is the most important thing in any relationship, I believe, it comes before love, sometimes. So, with you mentioning 'understanding' before those fancy love metaphors, you could take my heart away! I loved the crazy city with one way streets and how he can know the way just to the core, it is so imaginative! Good choice of words. I would say something here, even if you'll think it's worthless, I don't know I guess it sounds more anticipating, like if you said 'If I ever need someone' instead of 'you'? Wouldn't it have a better flow or something?

'Venom- laced
along the highway
of my eyeliner
Is going to bring you
to your knees,'

I still wonder why you capitalize the 'i's in your poems, some write it like this: 'i love you so much and i can't keep my eyes off you' and you capitalize it in every word, lol, I just find that weird. I like the highway of your eyeliner, such a poetic simile. The ending and the country sides, and routes, everything just expressed your idea in a way, so simple! I like it!

Haha* Standing applause* for this one. I had to smile all the way through. Love is tolerant and forgiving..Excellent write just excellent

This is wonderful, it really shows how much u love him no matter wut:)
I agree ot really flows like water, perfectly written:)

Haha! Oh darling, we all know you're a lune! But we ALL love u lol!

I chuckled at the highway of your eyeliner. I freaking loved that. You are so damn creative it's ridiculous how often I get jealous over what you come up, especially a make up metaphor lol

This was a beautiful dedication. Its a good feeling to find the one that gives us the country road!

This is so beautiful, Andrea.. the title.. the opening, the end.. the style of smoothness... ah, so perfect!