So sad =( 5/5 hun

Two words: LOVE IT

Sad :) But really an awesome write !

This was a sad poem. you did a nice job.
In stanza 1: You could really feel the emotion here. I like the metaphor with the water yet bring in a meteor.
Stanza 2: It is hard to forget things that happen. It's not like we can all of a sudden can just forget. You displayed that ncely here.
Stanza 3: I found this to be interesting yet sad. Reason is somebody doing that just because they got bored.
Stanza 4: This part was good. Sad that some people think cutting themselves is their way out of things. Not realizing there are people out there that care about them.
Stanza 5: Last but not least. Of course the ending results. Some people can't take it anymore. So unfortunately sometimes d o thngs they wish they didn't do. all in all a great write. :)

"I try to forget all the dreams
but instead, only louder become my screams."
These are my favorite lines :)

The rhymes flow really well in each stanza. I enjoyed reading this although it was indeed sad. Great write 5/5

-X

:( this better not be true hun!

I know sometimes you feel like there's nothing else u can do to get rid of the pain but just end it!
That's not the way girl u can deal with hurt in other unharmful ways

But good poem
5/5 x

I not only luv it but kno exactly wht ur talking about.