Thats a really sweet poem jake, good job! 5/5:)

Another poem full of feeling.
I liked the lines..

'When I get to talk to you later that morning
I hear my songbird singing
I hear her angelic, perfect voice
In my ears, My Bird Of Songs, is ringing'

Keep up the writing!

Romantic and sweet",nice poem
keep writing more:=)

I really like the metaphor of "My Bird of Songs" ... very creative. 5/5