Stars lit the universe...
Like a thousand diamonds,
Scattered on the floor of heaven"
This is an amazing piece of poetry! Every line screams as though it's jumping out of the page, the metaphors you use are beyond brilliant, this is outstanding.
"You held me...and for a moment,
I was swept away,
with the summer breeze"
Isn't it amazing the impact another person can have on our lives, it brings a calmness that nothing else no matter how far you search, can imitate, love is unique, so is the power it gives our feelings.
"Your eyes whispered words of love,
That came from the soul...
The silence was filled with yearning"
When you have a connection stronger than words, sometimes a single look will tell you everything you wish to know. The eyes of a lover are the gateway to truth about each other.
Overall this is a sweet sentiment of love. It's nice to see some people believe in it still, well written.