Comments : Painful Syllables

  • 11 years ago

    by Amy

    The emotions and depth in this poem are very nicely written I love the choice of words you've used for this poem very nice write. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Amy

    The emotions and depth in this poem are very nicely written I love the choice of words you've used for this poem very nice write. 5/5

  • This one is one of my top favourites of yours!
    Your raw emotion has been expressed flawlessly.
    A little bit of imagery; a little bit of rhyme. Perfect!

    You speak such truth. We dont forget what a guy says in his moments of anger. He can say sorry all he likes, but he cannot take it back. And it stains our minds and only worsens the next time.

    Adding to favourites!

    5/5