Waste of time

by acquisto alicia   Apr 5, 2012


Friends are a waste of time.
All they ever do is committ crimes.
Crimes everyday
crimes in every way.
They committ crimes against each other, even though they say they love each other.
they steal each others boyfriends.
they stab you in the back
but one of these days they better watch out; otherwise, they are gonna get left out.
they are gonna lose their friends for good and sometimes i sure wish they would.
Cause if you treat your friends like that, then you're not gonna have any friends left.

Let this be a lesson to all friends out there.
if you really do care about your friends, then you better make sure you dont do anything to make your friendship end.

please comment and tell me what you think.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Man of many friends, borrows stress. A true friend will always remain. When the sun sets, the moon rises. I think Sidh simply said it all.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    If your friend is able to snatch your boy friend, you should feel lucky that 'your boy friend was not a true lover'. Once you get the one who loves you truly, he will never leave you even if thousand girls try.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I agree with the above comments, the concept is cool and great but the flow is rough. Nonetheless, I really enjoy reading your poem. Nicely written. Keep up the good work and keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Great message...I liked your lines!
    Keep writing!

    Steven

  • 11 years ago

    by acquisto alicia

    Im trying my best. im new at this. i just started like last month. i really suck at writing poems.

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