Comments : Waste of time

  • 11 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Good, the more poetry you do the easier the flow will come

  • 11 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a great poem. Good friends are hard to come by nowadays. And you described that well here. All in all a great write. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Nice concept, The flow wasn't all that great but with more practice in writing it will come!:) I loved how you were very straight forward with this poem though.
    3/5

  • 11 years ago

    by acquisto alicia

    Im trying my best. im new at this. i just started like last month. i really suck at writing poems.

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Great message...I liked your lines!
    Keep writing!

    Steven

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I agree with the above comments, the concept is cool and great but the flow is rough. Nonetheless, I really enjoy reading your poem. Nicely written. Keep up the good work and keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    If your friend is able to snatch your boy friend, you should feel lucky that 'your boy friend was not a true lover'. Once you get the one who loves you truly, he will never leave you even if thousand girls try.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Man of many friends, borrows stress. A true friend will always remain. When the sun sets, the moon rises. I think Sidh simply said it all.