Comments : Moonflower

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    Have you ever wondered
    what will happen
    If the sun had no moon
    for it to chase each day

    --- yup, I have wondered and I guess it will be sad and boring for the sun.

    Well written piece, the above stanza was my favorite along with the ending.

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Well written love the words u used 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Hmm..have never heard of a moonflower but from reading this it leaves me with awe for it holds a mystery of beauty which makes us want to explore more! A soft yet beautiful write to read :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    "Have you ever been moonstruck
    by the beauty of a moonflower
    exotic and rare
    ambrosial as an angel>"

    ^Such a magical scene is painted by your words.

    "Our night skies will be
    forever dark
    for the starlight
    is no surrogate for a
    blooming moonshine."

    ^ This is such a good contrast to show the splendid and magical synergy.

    In fact each stanza is so unique and so well written that it is just so beautiful to read from begining to end. Fantastic!

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    I have to say David I was in awe reading this one!
    I love the words and images you have used here, they are beautiful and magical I felt a sense of peace while reading this one. I think it's because I loveeeeeeeeeee the moon itself. It is gorgeous when it is a clear sky and all you see is the moon and stars surrounding it. I also love looking at the water when there is a moon just over it and you can see the water clearly. It reminds me of my holiday house in Wollongong where I have seen the moon do that a few times and I always end up speechless.
    A gorgeous write David,
    Simply beautiful.

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Beautifully written, I felt as if you were painting a picture as I read. (:

  • 5 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Wonderfully written!
    "Have you ever wondered

    what will happen

    If the sun had no moon

    for it to chase each day

    Our night skies will be

    forever dark

    for the star light

    is no surrogate for a

    blooming moonshine"
    Awesome lines.
    But "Moonflower!?!" Never heard of this but as the poem flows it really has a great impact on the poem.
    May be, this is how rare or unique your love is!?
    I definitely like the poem as a whole!
    5/5
    If possible, 10/5! Haha...

  • 5 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow, magnificent write, I loved it and loved reading it, one of my favorite poems from you, I was just amazed and loved the wording 5/5

  • 5 months ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I have enjoyed reading this like I have before :D

    • 4 months ago

      by A lonely soul

      Thank you. Even I enjoy it when I happen to stop by. Hope all is well. Best.