Rainbow Kiss

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Apr 7, 2012


Blissful dreamer or romantic fool
Fairy behavior with impish rules

Queen of darkness yet source of light
Leading my way in the obscure night

My world is magic, a place so surreal
Candy red roses, yellow daffodils

Soft downy clouds, shadows pink and white
Lemon drop sun ever shining bright

Prince of darkness not a mere man
Make you tremble at the touch of my hand

Taste the rainbow the sweetness it brings
Fly to the moon on magical wings

When the day breaks, its just you and me
Leaving behind our mystical dreams

Obediently march in life's dull parade
Till once again we pull down nights shade

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  • 5 years ago

    by Mermaids Lullaby

    Beautifully and flawlessly written, as always. *_*

  • 5 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was awesome, your creative style really showed in this peice...well written :) this is going into my fav's

  • 5 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem but what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem kbut what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Blissful dreamer or romantic fool
    Fairy behavior with impish rules

    ^This opening sets the scene for a read that has much to hold...sort of an introduction to a boy who has fallen in love and deeply over joyed...just my feelings :)

    Queen of darkness yet source of light
    Leading my way in the obscure night

    ^A very good description of the golden maiden the moon..queen of darkness..like that expression.

    Soft downy clouds, shadows pink and white

    ^Reading this creates images of soft pillows that are pink and white in color!

    Prince of darkness not a mere man
    Make you tremble at the touch of my hand

    ^If I am not mistaken you are describing yourself as the night..caressing the beautiful moon..liked this :)

    When the day breaks, its just you and me
    Leaving behind our mystical dreams

    ^Ahhh...even night and day have feelings..like human feelings and here you and your love are placed on the level of a magical romance..it just makes me smile!

    Overall, I enjoyed this read..so romantic and sweet...!