Rainbow Kiss

Beautifully and flawlessly written, as always. *_*

This was awesome, your creative style really showed in this peice...well written :) this is going into my fav's

I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem but what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5

I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem kbut what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5

Blissful dreamer or romantic fool
Fairy behavior with impish rules

^This opening sets the scene for a read that has much to hold...sort of an introduction to a boy who has fallen in love and deeply over joyed...just my feelings :)

Queen of darkness yet source of light
Leading my way in the obscure night

^A very good description of the golden maiden the moon..queen of darkness..like that expression.

Soft downy clouds, shadows pink and white

^Reading this creates images of soft pillows that are pink and white in color!

Prince of darkness not a mere man
Make you tremble at the touch of my hand

^If I am not mistaken you are describing yourself as the night..caressing the beautiful moon..liked this :)

When the day breaks, its just you and me
Leaving behind our mystical dreams

^Ahhh...even night and day have feelings..like human feelings and here you and your love are placed on the level of a magical romance..it just makes me smile!

Overall, I enjoyed this read..so romantic and sweet...!