Comments : Rainbow Kiss

  • 5 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow, I am always amazed at what people come up with when it's a love poem, so when something things beuatiful comes along, you know it really comes from the authors heart,

    it's a very lovely poem TJ , i trired to qupte a favorite line but then i liked too many haha, love this poem :)

  • 5 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww, this poem was so beautiful and sweet.. It made me imagine a rainbow and everything you described.

    I really liked your choice of words; they were so lovely such as: "candy red roses" "lemon drop sun"

    I really enjoyed this poem. Great job! :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    TJ this is beautiful. You are amazing when it comes to rhyming and it just made the poem flow even better! An awesome job with this write! Loved it completely

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Your rhyming is so unique; some couples were subtle, and I like it that way.

    And the colors... oh my, the rainbow palette really played music while reading.
    so pretty and exotic :D

  • 5 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Blissful dreamer or romantic fool
    Fairy behavior with impish rules

    this was my fav stanza. I was just amazed by the rhyming and how it flowed so smoothly.

    Another great write from you.

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Hhhhmm! TJ, you're a natural romanticist because not everyone can pen a love poem with such evocative, alluring words with lovely metaphors that gets one pondering in daze. I love this poem so much beyond your thoughts. This is one of my best love poems, that i've read and feel inlove instantly. Got me blushing and thinking about myself regards, joys of love. Keep up churning magnificent poems as always and thanks for sharing. You're blessed with this art by God. Bon Travail!!! buddy, Cheers! :-).

  • 5 years ago

    by Illusion

    I love this... One day I'll be as good as u guys..

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was so cute Tj! I loveeeee how you took a simple topic of a rainbow and turned it into something so romantic, so magical.

    Youre details were beautiful and I loved the ending. Pulling down nights shades, that was so cute, in that moment I pictured a man pulling down blinds with a candlelight glow in the background.

    Beautiful poem!

  • 5 years ago

    by Meme

    Awwwwww, one of the cutest, sweetest piece you ever wrote. I like the contradictions that some of the lines have, it added an extra depth to the emotions you get after reading this. Got me smiling the whole time when reading it, and tells me what a sincere and heartfelf poem this is.

    Great job TJ :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    TJ, I adore the softness of the piece. I like how you gentley pull the reader in. This is a sweet poem with a lot of heart behind it. I think it is moving.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Blissful dreamer or romantic fool
    Fairy behavior with impish rules

    ^This opening sets the scene for a read that has much to hold...sort of an introduction to a boy who has fallen in love and deeply over joyed...just my feelings :)

    Queen of darkness yet source of light
    Leading my way in the obscure night

    ^A very good description of the golden maiden the moon..queen of darkness..like that expression.

    Soft downy clouds, shadows pink and white

    ^Reading this creates images of soft pillows that are pink and white in color!

    Prince of darkness not a mere man
    Make you tremble at the touch of my hand

    ^If I am not mistaken you are describing yourself as the night..caressing the beautiful moon..liked this :)

    When the day breaks, its just you and me
    Leaving behind our mystical dreams

    ^Ahhh...even night and day have feelings..like human feelings and here you and your love are placed on the level of a magical romance..it just makes me smile!

    Overall, I enjoyed this read..so romantic and sweet...!

  • 5 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem kbut what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem but what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was awesome, your creative style really showed in this peice...well written :) this is going into my fav's

  • 5 years ago

    by Mermaids Lullaby

    Beautifully and flawlessly written, as always. *_*