The shocking letter

by deshanique brown   Apr 9, 2012


She walks through the dark all alone
She seeks a message on her phone
She read the message in shocking fear
she took after running in despair

She was now standing at her door step
rembering the message she had kept
she reached to open the door
and heard a boom and felled to the floor

She was then shot and the heart
than began to cry and fall apart
she looked up in her last breath
and saw her mother on the door step

TO BE CONTINUED

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  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Great work! can you write the part 2?hehe

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Amazing!

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Great :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    She walks through the dark all alone
    She seeks a message on her phone
    She read the message in shocking fear
    she took after running in despair

    ^u can feel the emotion of fear, as shes reading something not good on her phone

    wow this is so deep, who shot her? and what did the letter say

    very good :]]

    5/5