Comments : The shocking letter

  • 5 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    She walks through the dark all alone
    She seeks a message on her phone
    She read the message in shocking fear
    she took after running in despair

    ^u can feel the emotion of fear, as shes reading something not good on her phone

    wow this is so deep, who shot her? and what did the letter say

    very good :]]

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Great :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Amazing!

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Great work! can you write the part 2?hehe