Darling there are some mistakes but it's nice just here are some pointers if u don't mind them

Listening(to) the ryhmes of life through(out the many) times..
Each moment, a lesson, u learn sometimes (that the)
Trust and care(of) all(the) dead and(of the) gone,
(are) Walkin alone is all( of what) I've(ever) known !
A caring soul of mine somedays,(have the)
Rememberance now is left today....
Stone heart of mine,feels no more pain;
Sculpted by the-sorrow rains....
Rise of darkness capture gloss-
Child of innocence FOREVER LOST !

Thanx

So dark and the flaws very fascinating..great job!5/5

Very creative :)

Now thats a dark poem, I like your flow i liked how it sounded in my head the way you put your words, but thats justs a bonus to this dark piece. . . . . . though I saw the mistakes too but still got what you said

Nice work on this

Hey bro hw r u? Well d thots in dis are good but dere are some mistakes, it seems like u force ur words to rhyme, it is not necessary to rhyme evry line in poem its a sign of immaturity, second dis poem could be very awsme though its very good but its like dis poem shud touch more depth well keep it up one m sure u'll touch d sky :-) best of luck

I'm forever lost very well written :) 5/5

Out of the crowd, stand with your cloud. There's always one out there, who cares. It takes some time, to find out whom. Patience, is key to survival.

Well, its a nice poem...
One thing I want to say to you, please, if possible, and i know it is, try not to use short or slang words while writing poem...!
Anyway, keep it up...well done!

This also is a dark one, with a folk twist to it

American folk as in u for you and walkin like the free wheelin Bob Dylan

far out!

Totally love this . very deep. and love how you describe the darkness is inside you and you lost your childhood innocence .