WOW! just a blast of Awesomeness! hit me from this poem 5/5 Keep Writing! :)

Wow! I loved this one, it really was very creative and quite brilliant to write a poem about not being able to write a poem. I understand the feeling in this because several times I've wanted to write a poem but the words won't come to me. But I thought this was a neat creative idea and I loved how you used unique words to express your feelings in this.

Great job! So creative! Love your word choices 5/5

Great job! So creative! Love your word choices 5/5

Nice work! Though I agree to some, I still appreciate your work! You did well! There's a potential.. continue to express yourself in any way you can.. God Bless!

Waw that was really good very touching

Trying to write down the first line of my poem;
Wishing it sounds good to rhyme,
But, it was so hard to find
the exact word hanging in my mind...
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im gona answer this line
wel done

I thought this was a unique poem. It reminded me of writer's block which a lot of people get. I thought this was developed well and it all fit in well together. Nice write. :)

I can really relate to this poem. I can go months without writing anything and then suddenly "breakthrough", often going into the early hours of the morning.

Though the grammer isnt the best, it dosnt knock the quality of the poem.

Keep it up! A good read, will look into more of your stuff =)

5/5 from me

Touching, Unique, and I can relate!!
4/5

I love the flow of this poem, I do agree with the commenters that corrected your small mistakes though but other than that its a really nice poem.

I think you have a good piece here, but I also feel that you have the same problems like me. Present and past tense. This piece goes back and forth and so it should be better to just focus on either present or past.
So I made a few suggestion, and I simply rewrote your poem in present tense, there might still be grammatical errors but I feel that it sounds a bit better. IF you want you can take some of my suggestions.

It's already two o'clock in the morning,
My mind is still awake
while I'm holding this pen,
and a blank piece of paper...

Starting from nothing...
while I'm drowning in deep thoughts
and grasping for those words
that are cluttered inside my mind...

I'm trying to write down the first line of my poem
wishing it sounds good to rhyme,
but it's so hard to find the exact words
even when they are hanging in my mind.

Time unnoticed sweeps away;
My mind starts to be doom
and narrowed slowly.
My somnolent eyes are fighting to stay awake
But they trigger a pain and bitterness,
while teasing me...to give up...

Though, inside of me... there is a soul
fervent to stay awake
whispering a thousand words
that echo and dance with my senses...

I hold my pen again, tightly;
but I feel so dump, so lifeless,
My fingers are stiff, soft and boneless...

Until the light fathom into my sight
daze from the morning grace
and finally I realized
the blank piece is on my side...

Trying to write in rhyme itself is excellent rhyme

This is my fav. of your poems...the rhyme comes naturally the words perfectly fit...well stitch!!
5/5 hehe really nice!!

I agree your grammar could use a little work, but, ignoring the language lesson, it's truly an excellent piece. The content is far more important than the presentation. I give it a solid 5/5. Good job.

This is really good :]
i enjoyed reading :]

5/5

I like!! :) 5/5

Nice job with the poem, i tend to also find myself sitting around and unable to write a poem, but only to suddenly find the words that can start writing my poems! Great job with the poem and keep up the good work!
-Steven

Great read and pen. Adan7777

Breathtaking indeed. I have been going through writers block for ages now & your piece has captured the reality i could link to. Great write.

all the best and take care