This was an awesome poem for me to read over coffee. Maple you have an undeniable power to capture such emotion within your poems and the most fantastic imagery. I loved this whole piece but this line was esp. powerful for me :
you save me everyday, just by breathing
It is great to have someone like this, whose
very existance can make all of the difference in your life. Never let go of them.
I hope they get to read this poem it was beautiful. I have no nominations left but wont forget you next week.
Awesome piece sista.You never fail to surprise me.
6 years ago
This one was a peaceful poem, I liked it a lot.
I mean to say that you were dipped in cement and hence can't move was creative and then followed by that person being there to help you. That was really sweet, and it made me remember someone and the ending was for me stunning. In you, in me, and in us.
6 years ago
Psht, wings are not clipped, not one bit. You ARE an angel, and I'm sure he agrees with me :)
This is absolutely gorgeous poetry. It hit me right in the heart, such a beautiful piece. I can tell this was therapeutic for you, and that usually makes for some intense, emotional poetry... and it did :) Beautiful!
Oh man I love the beginning! I wish it was that easy to find peace...but just lighting a candle. Peace can be found through a person's light as well, people can be our candles. We do have strength to overcome everything, it is just hidden from us sometimes.
"because your always at the end"
^The "your" here should be "you're"
This was a beautiful piece, dear, and I really enjoyed reading it! :)